There are parts in thes video that work really well and others that seem like they're just filler. The part with the live chat is really interesting and provocative and as a viewer I'm left wanting to find out more about how the conversation went. Perhaps you could return to successful elements, letting them breath a bit more, like the way parts of the song return to certian sounds and lyrics. Perhaps haveing th same rendom online chat but the next time with a different person so the respons is different.
Obviously earlier on in the track the words are more legible and this should be followed through, throughout the track.
There are parts in thes video that work really well and others that seem like they're just filler. The part with the live chat is really interesting and provocative and as a viewer I'm left wanting to find out more about how the conversation went. Perhaps you could return to successful elements, letting them breath a bit more, like the way parts of the song return to certian sounds and lyrics. Perhaps haveing th same rendom online chat but the next time with a different person so the respons is different.
ReplyDeleteObviously earlier on in the track the words are more legible and this should be followed through, throughout the track.