Nice work so far, very close to the atmosphere of the song, but the lines, sadly, aren't that readable - so here you need to search for another way, maybe no outlines? And rethink about the position of the text, you have so much space to use? Just think about that.
So simple and pure! Since you're only using a few colours and shapes, I think you can afford to enhance the interface a bit more without it taking focus from the animation. I think the filled in lipstick works well, maybe use red for all of the words? Love the morning sun.
This is a really fun video you just need to work a little but on making the words more legible :)
ReplyDeleteLike the singing character you animated a lot!!!
ReplyDeleteNice work so far, very close to the atmosphere of the song, but the lines, sadly, aren't that readable - so here you need to search for another way, maybe no outlines? And rethink about the position of the text, you have so much space to use? Just think about that.
ReplyDeletemaking the text maybe a bit larger might solve the problem of it not being legible, otherwise the video looks quite cute and fun!
ReplyDeleteSo simple and pure! Since you're only using a few colours and shapes, I think you can afford to enhance the interface a bit more without it taking focus from the animation. I think the filled in lipstick works well, maybe use red for all of the words? Love the morning sun.
ReplyDeleteThat's really a cute video!!Perhapes you can try some colors to make the lyrics more obvious to read.
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